love how the last chapter title is from the princess bride!

Sounds interesting. You ought to make paragraphs out of more than one line. It's pointless to place so much emphasis on every single sentence you type.

AWW THIS STORY IS SO AWESOMEE! i am acyually glad i got sick cause if i didnt i never wouldve stayed home from school and then i never wouldve been bored and look for a new story on fp that was completed and i never wouldve spent the day reading this! AHH! yay.

Loved it to tears!

hayy, i like Drive all night by All american rejects :P loll. oh no! i like liam, but i hope he gets wid the blonde chick [i have a ssrly crappi memory] and obviously anthony and polly got to get togethor...but i hope atticus is in it too! he sounds coolio!

"are you calling me curvy?"
BAHAHAHAHAHA. swet

lmaoo. this is suprisingly entertaining. i like! tho the character developement is kinda diff from usual..good diff!

Wow, this is absolutely my fave story...
This is my second time reading it and I LOVE it!
Anthony is sweet, I mean adorable:)

GAH.. you just made me read the whole story in one night! and it's 3:51 in the morning! D:

oh my gosh..XD i really need to sleep already..XD but just so you know, you just earned yourself another fan. i dont know if i clicked the favorite author button, i cant remember anymore but im gonna if i haven't yet..XD

thanks for the great story! i enjoyed it very much. i was laughing like crazy man.. XD

hope to read your other works soon! after my homework at school that is.. >_<

i loved it.. :]

im going to comment on the other chapter too..XD

ok, neway, i know the messanger.. it's by lois lowry right? my friend told me about it and when he went with me to the bookstore, i bought 2 of her books. then another.

the messanger
gathering blue
the giver

they're good. i want to read a summer to die.. i think that's the title.. 0_o

neway, back tot he chapter..XD i love anthony.. he's so adorable.. >_< i want a guy like that! >=o
XD

That was.. *-* Wonderful!
i cannot tell you how much i just love your story.. oh my gosh..
it makes me.. giddy and.. i dont know.. something good but goodness.. >_<

oh, i'm abit of a grammar freak too.. my friends just roll their eyes when i correct them. but i do it more on writing. although i know i still do have some grammar mistakes sometimes.. ironic.. 0_o

but anyway, i loved how you said that old books can be used as a metaphor for love. i love old books. they smell so sweet. i just love them..XD although i do get my sinuses act up cos of my allergy sometimes because of the whiff of the air when you close or open the old books that i find in the basement (aunts house)..
neway, sorry i wrote so much.. D:
i like reviews on my stories too. unfortunately, i haven't really posted any here yet..

ok,i know i should've just said "I SUPER DUPER LOVED IT!"
and so i am saying it again..

I SUPER DUPER LOVED IT!! i haven't even finished reading it yet but I LOVED IT! :] hope you read this.. ^^

love

just one thing, for goodness sake, change it to "Anthony and I". This prob my 3rd or 4th time reading this story. Love it to bits.

That was absolutely the best story I've read on this site (I have read many :) ) AWESOME JOB!

The ending was super sweet :) I only wish you had included the epilogue here. But I'm so in love with Anthony.

My only criticism is that you never really continued on with the pessimism and grammar freakness. You mentioned them both in the beginning, but I never really saw evidence of it throughout the story.