Wow. I totally love this!:) It is true that 50year sucess stories don't exist anymore..and greatly incapsulated with this short fic:)

The only mistake I saw here was:

[I hear his groggy voice and fell his lips trying to wake me with kisses.] I think it should be... 'feel' instead of 'fell'?

The descriptions were beautiful, and I love your transition from the happiness when they were younger, to the sadness later in the years. And I really do love the line:

"It seemed as if the age of romanticism and eternal devotion withered away until finally, it died with him."

Great job!

Oh, very nice little story. I don't know if this really happened to you or not but the beautiful thing is that you made it seem like it happened to you with the imagery you provided. This was very nicely written. Great Job and keep up the writing.

I'm getting ready to go check out your other stories!