wow! This is almost exactly what someone I know is going through. They have depression too. This is very well written.

This was awesome. Well-written, good subject, everything was perfect. The way you described her thoughts and feelings was exactly the way a depressed a girl feels (I know from experience). GREAT job!

... Not sure if this an Essay or a short story but it.. It just is.. well right. The writing just speaks and your voice is just..
I like it.

Sleep is oblivion, and [the] oblivion is salvation. That line is brillant. The addition of the just makes it resonate more when I say it aloud.

If this is the standard of your work, I'll become a regular.