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| call me ish 2007-06-12 ch 1,  | abuseyou.. you don't know how long i've just sat here, staring at this damn review box trying to come up with words... you have the aility to capture and describe things amazingly, and in such detail that those of us intheknow are left breathless, and those who can't even phathom, are still left silent. it's beautiful caitlin. i really hope things are better since then though. |
| angel953 2007-06-11 ch 1, | abusethis is absolutely amazing! gosh i havent said that to u in a WHILE...listening to some odd music right now **sings along** so i am kinda hyper writing this...review me!plz bye bye now from ur bud u know who! |
| Travis C. Eckert 2007-05-08 ch 1, | abuseSeems like no hope in this. Good job, yet scary. I have some stories/essays up. Not much anything of poetry up, might have some during summer/coming weeks. I know I have been saying this but finals are coming up. |
| Shookie Smiles Sweetly 2007-04-11 ch 1, | abuseChilling, but I think everyone's felt like that before. Good job! --ShookieInLove, formerly known as Shookie Smiles Sweetly |
| C. Patrick Ostiguy 2007-04-09 ch 1, | abuseI can identify with this poem a lot, particularly the end, but it sort of uses too common devices, not subtle or cryptic enough for my tastes. Too straightforward. |
| Jordygirl 2007-04-09 ch 1, | abuseVery dark. Not a fan of the dark stuff, but this was also good. I hope it's not based on something that actually happened... o_0 Anyway, it was good, if dark, and you have an interesting (good interesting) writing style. pleasereviewme |
| Ashelin 2007-04-09 ch 1, | abuseThis was really sad. Depressing to say the least, but I loved it. I could really sense the feeling of helplessness, of nothingness. Enduring through pain. Great job. |