Reviews for Under The Red Sun

Jaime 2007-06-11 ch 1,	I'm going to say that you have a gift for this. Alot of the time people just throw words together and call it a poem, most of the time the words have nothing to do with eachother, but your writing is just...wow.
Amelia 2007-05-13 ch 1,	i don't have any constructive criticism, or anything, since i don't know much about writing, but i enjoyed reading this and i think you did a good job.
Jessie 2007-04-21 ch 1,	Another great poem Mishka. I love it. and of course i know what its about and..yeah I feel the same way stil...I miss him...love jess
sarah 2007-04-16 ch 1,	T_T it was great...you have one spelling error its light... but i can't write poetry as good so i'm bad at telling any one if they did any thing wrong...so i think its great
lucien velemere 2007-04-14 ch 1,	really good. but really dark. look on the bright side of things and yes i knowim being a hypcryte
Magigal 2007-04-09 ch 1,	Very good. You might one to make the lines fit a bit more by having the same number of sylables with the ones you're rhyming with.
Amber 2007-04-09 ch 1,	Hey! Great poem, it's really touching and thoughtful great use of metaphors. Masterpiece =D
Bonnie 2007-04-09 ch 1,	this is amazing just like you glad i could assist with two words LOL reading your work makes me so happy you're so talented x