hahaha i love the ending part of this chaptur xD

hehe. I like luci. he tries very unsubtly to hit on gabriel...
well probably not unsubtly. but whatever!!
Anyways, can't wait for more!!
Lee

yay! intriguing

update soon?

LOLOLOLOLOLOL. Epic.

Conintue!

I would love to share my thoughts when I was reading this but some are vary... messed up. So I won't share them.

Though I LOVE this story and I want to eat it with some marshmellows.. That was one of my weird thoughts.

Hey, I just wanted to let you know this story has been added to the C2 Community, "High School Confidential," a place just for slashy high school stories. Please check it out!! ^_^

I was wondering when you're going to update?

this is so funny, update soon?

Really awesome, I love it. Cant wait for the next chapter. More soon?

“‘God is my strength!’”
“‘The father’s joy!” -> Yeah, I'd be freaked out to. LOL

Tiny errors: “So, where’s you girlfriend?” & “You parents asked..." - 'you' should be 'your'.

~D@-c0nfu53d-1

This is really cool, I like the plot twist! Waiting for 7!

what's the line he is repeatedly typing? i love the line, "I'm practicing for when I write the real thing." "God is my strength!" and "The father's joy!" is also brilliant. you are a good writer with a talent for the quirky, as if you haven't heard that tired old cliche before.

Once more, your strong and quirky characters leave me fair cross when the chapter ends. I love the way this is going, and I love the slants towards religion, keeps any story good. I'm pretty happy with this, it being the only fictionpress story I still read. Good job!