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Bloodfeeder
2008-10-21
ch 6,
hehe. I like luci. he tries very unsubtly to hit on gabriel...
well probably not unsubtly. but whatever!!
Anyways, can't wait for more!!
Lee
Would not Could not in a Bo...
2008-09-04
ch 6,
yay! intriguing
vampirezombieduck
2008-04-20
ch 6,
update soon?
Daydream Nation
2008-03-30
ch 6,
LOLOLOLOLOLOL. Epic.
Shadowy Fluffball
2008-01-23
ch 6,
Conintue!
Casey and the Golden Leaf B...
2007-11-24
ch 6,
I would love to share my thoughts when I was reading this but some are vary... messed up. So I won't share them.

Though I LOVE this story and I want to eat it with some marshmellows.. That was one of my weird thoughts.
Switch
2007-10-14
ch 6,
Hey, I just wanted to let you know this story has been added to the C2 Community, "High School Confidential," a place just for slashy high school stories. Please check it out!! ^_^
merrymowmow
2007-08-09
ch 6,
I was wondering when you're going to update?
caramel blazers
2007-05-19
ch 6,
this is so funny, update soon?
ks darkstorm
2007-05-14
ch 6,
Really awesome, I love it. Cant wait for the next chapter. More soon?
Da-c0nfu53d-1
2007-04-29
ch 6,
“‘God is my strength!’”
“‘The father’s joy!” -> Yeah, I'd be freaked out to. LOL

Tiny errors: “So, where’s you girlfriend?” & “You parents asked..." - 'you' should be 'your'.

~D@-c0nfu53d-1
FreewayofFlight
2007-04-26
ch 6,
This is really cool, I like the plot twist! Waiting for 7!
no account
2007-04-24
ch 6,
what's the line he is repeatedly typing? i love the line, "I'm practicing for when I write the real thing." "God is my strength!" and "The father's joy!" is also brilliant. you are a good writer with a talent for the quirky, as if you haven't heard that tired old cliche before.
Faerie Tales
2007-04-23
ch 6,
Once more, your strong and quirky characters leave me fair cross when the chapter ends. I love the way this is going, and I love the slants towards religion, keeps any story good. I'm pretty happy with this, it being the only fictionpress story I still read. Good job!
magalina
2007-04-23
ch 6,
lol! I loved that ending!
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