 honey splattered brains 2009-01-21 . chapter 6hahaha i love the ending part of this chaptur xD |
 Bloodfeeder 2008-10-21 . chapter 6hehe. I like luci. he tries very unsubtly to hit on gabriel...
well probably not unsubtly. but whatever!!
Anyways, can't wait for more!!
Lee |
 Would not Could not in a Box 2008-09-04 . chapter 6yay! intriguing |
 vampirezombieduck 2008-04-20 . chapter 6update soon? |
 Daydream Nation 2008-03-30 . chapter 6LOLOLOLOLOLOL. Epic. |
 Shadowy Fluffball 2008-01-23 . chapter 6Conintue! |
 CaseyBear 2007-11-24 . chapter 6I would love to share my thoughts when I was reading this but some are vary... messed up. So I won't share them.
Though I LOVE this story and I want to eat it with some marshmellows.. That was one of my weird thoughts. |
 Switch 2007-10-14 . chapter 6Hey, I just wanted to let you know this story has been added to the C2 Community, "High School Confidential," a place just for slashy high school stories. Please check it out!! ^_^ |
 merrymowmow 2007-08-09 . chapter 6I was wondering when you're going to update? |
 purple sea 2007-05-19 . chapter 6this is so funny, update soon? |
 ks darkstorm 2007-05-14 . chapter 6Really awesome, I love it. Cant wait for the next chapter. More soon? |
 Da-c0nfu53d-1 2007-04-29 . chapter 6“‘God is my strength!’”
“‘The father’s joy!” -> Yeah, I'd be freaked out to. LOL
Tiny errors: “So, where’s you girlfriend?” & “You parents asked..." - 'you' should be 'your'.
~D@-c0nfu53d-1 |
 FreewayofFlight 2007-04-26 . chapter 6This is really cool, I like the plot twist! Waiting for 7! |
 no account 2007-04-24 . chapter 6 what's the line he is repeatedly typing? i love the line, "I'm practicing for when I write the real thing." "God is my strength!" and "The father's joy!" is also brilliant. you are a good writer with a talent for the quirky, as if you haven't heard that tired old cliche before. |
 Faerie Tales 2007-04-23 . chapter 6Once more, your strong and quirky characters leave me fair cross when the chapter ends. I love the way this is going, and I love the slants towards religion, keeps any story good. I'm pretty happy with this, it being the only fictionpress story I still read. Good job! |