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| Would not Could not in a Bo... 2008-09-04 ch 6,  | abuseyay! intriguing |
| vampirezombieduck 2008-04-20 ch 6, | abuseupdate soon? |
| Daydream Nation 2008-03-30 ch 6, | abuseLOLOLOLOLOLOL. Epic. |
| Shadowy Fluffball 2008-01-23 ch 6, | abuseConintue! |
| Casey and the Sunshine Bear... 2007-11-24 ch 6, | abuseI would love to share my thoughts when I was reading this but some are vary... messed up. So I won't share them. Though I LOVE this story and I want to eat it with some marshmellows.. That was one of my weird thoughts. |
| Switch 2007-10-14 ch 6, | abuseHey, I just wanted to let you know this story has been added to the C2 Community, "High School Confidential," a place just for slashy high school stories. Please check it out!! ^_^ |
| merrymowmow 2007-08-09 ch 6, | abuseI was wondering when you're going to update? |
| caramel blazers 2007-05-19 ch 6, | abusethis is so funny, update soon? |
| ks darkstorm 2007-05-14 ch 6, | abuseReally awesome, I love it. Cant wait for the next chapter. More soon? |
| Da-c0nfu53d-1 2007-04-29 ch 6, | abuse“‘God is my strength!’” “‘The father’s joy!” -> Yeah, I'd be freaked out to. LOL Tiny errors: “So, where’s you girlfriend?” & “You parents asked..." - 'you' should be 'your'. ~D@-c0nfu53d-1 |
| FreewayofFlight 2007-04-26 ch 6, | abuseThis is really cool, I like the plot twist! Waiting for 7! |
| no account 2007-04-24 ch 6, anon. | abusewhat's the line he is repeatedly typing? i love the line, "I'm practicing for when I write the real thing." "God is my strength!" and "The father's joy!" is also brilliant. you are a good writer with a talent for the quirky, as if you haven't heard that tired old cliche before. |
| Faerie Tales 2007-04-23 ch 6, | abuseOnce more, your strong and quirky characters leave me fair cross when the chapter ends. I love the way this is going, and I love the slants towards religion, keeps any story good. I'm pretty happy with this, it being the only fictionpress story I still read. Good job! |
| magalina 2007-04-23 ch 6, | abuselol! I loved that ending! |
| Catseye*Rose 2007-04-22 ch 6, | abuseHee, Luci's cute ^_^ I love the name Gabriel! And that is the best argument ever... |