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| perpetual questions 2007-07-23 ch 1, | abuseI wish it were true, that one can't hurt someone if one doesn't know the person. From what I know, it doesn't always work like that... Anyway, interesting story. It's short but thought provoking. I like it. |
| Qzie 2007-05-29 ch 1, | abuseThat was good, I really liked it. It needs some editing, but it's still really good. It would work well as the beginning for a bigger story, too, but it's also good as is. So yeah, nice job! |
| Ivory Taint 2007-05-26 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. Though you may want to proofread this for errors. |
| The Reverse Edge Blade 2007-05-05 ch 1, | abuseI liked the message of the poem, and how you got it down! This was cool! I liked the shortness of the story; you didn't write more than you had to to get the main point down. Great job with this! The Reverse Edge Blade |
| All Alone With Her Thoughts 2007-04-13 ch 1, | abuseI am so there. I can really relate. There are a couple of spelling errors, but that's okay. I have those all the times. Glad you updated! Rowan. |