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perpetual questions
2007-07-23
ch 1,
abuseI wish it were true, that one can't hurt someone if one doesn't know the person. From what I know, it doesn't always work like that...

Anyway, interesting story. It's short but thought provoking. I like it.
Qzie
2007-05-29
ch 1,
abuseThat was good, I really liked it. It needs some editing, but it's still really good. It would work well as the beginning for a bigger story, too, but it's also good as is. So yeah, nice job!
Ivory Taint
2007-05-26
ch 1,
abuseInteresting. Though you may want to proofread this for errors.
The Reverse Edge Blade
2007-05-05
ch 1,
abuseI liked the message of the poem, and how you got it down! This was cool! I liked the shortness of the story; you didn't write more than you had to to get the main point down. Great job with this!
The Reverse Edge Blade
All Alone With Her Thoughts
2007-04-13
ch 1,
abuseI am so there. I can really relate.

There are a couple of spelling errors, but that's okay. I have those all the times.

Glad you updated!

Rowan.
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