aw , is'nt thr robber nice ? well , anyway back to the story , I guess it's written pretty good and the obvious comedy was well-placed too. Keep it up !

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UDN2K my name
23.7.2008

This is honestly one of my favorite stories on here. I appauled you. :claps:

This was great! You had me laughing the whole time! Man, I wish my school would do a skit like this or something. Hilarious!

Right, anyway... I just wanted to say great job!

I love this Play. It is really good, believe me. You should send this in too Great plains theatre conference.

That was great, I've always wanted to write something like this.

Is the gun real? :)

OMG! That was so funny! I loved this play - I could just imagine it actually happening. The ROBBER RULES! Great job!
Oni Giri Slash