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| WolfMoon1013 2008-09-17 ch 8,  | abusePlease keep this story going i live to read more of it. i need more. Its been awhile since your last chapter, please don't let it be that long ago, i want to see how the story goes. Your faithful reader Belle |
| Lady Silver fang 2007-05-03 ch 5, | abuseThat was a very good chapter. Kris is bad for not telling her what really happened. I think that's going to cause on a strain on the relationship that is to come...or do you have something else up your sleeve? That was a good chapter. NEXT! lol |
| Lady Silver fang 2007-04-16 ch 3, | abuse"Hey look up in the sky, it's a bird, it's a plane, it's a fifty-year old Puerto Rican!" I thought I would die when I read that. It was funny lol. Well anyway. Just wished to say that this story of yours is coming along quite nicely. Have you ever throught of publishing it for real? I bet it would be a great hit! ~Lady Silver fang~ |
| Lady Silver fang 2007-04-11 ch 2, | abuseAnother great chapter! I wonder if that girl is Kris's new love? *shrugs* Well I'll have to see for the next update huh? *grins* Until next time!! |
| London Dupre 2007-04-10 ch 2, | abuseThis story is against everything I believe in... regardless, it is AwSOmE. I love your style. Chapter two continues to impress. London |
| Rylee Lauden 2007-04-10 ch 1, | abuseI like it. Personally, I don't swing that way... But I like the feel of this story. It feels like one of those old detective shows with a new spin. It's enjoyable. |
| Lady Silver fang 2007-04-10 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was very good! I loved it!! You must update soon please! ^__^ |