aww. this ones sad...but its still good. and it has a pretty good message...

wow..that was really sad, but so true. also very beautiful writing. ^_^ have a nice day

Well, when I read it was about incest, i didn't think that it'd be so innocent and pure. It was sad and sweet, making it better. at my school, recently, we lost a senior to drunk driving and i find the emotions in the story so frightening real. LOVe it!
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I'm stumbling on words trying to find what to say. I DON'T know what to say. It's perfect in every way. A very emotional story. I'm stunned beyond believe. Keep on with what you're doing.

Aww. That's so sad! I liked it. Is it going to be a one-shot or a story??

Very sweet story! I uh, kinda have a thing about incest (but not of a sexual nature). I feel like my idea of it is innocent, but most people don't get it . . . my idea is the same as in your story. I really like the way you did the relationship. It was very pure. It was based in friendship and companionship, not lust as you tend to find in stories about incest. I like your use of touch and smell to convey emotion. And it was sad. I liked it!