i love the description "silent as a sigh". the whole thing is so subtle, so sad. i think the length actually works really well - it can often be hard to get such meaning into something so short.

Beautiful, short, sad... perfect. I really liked it.

This is juat glorious, and it's going on my favorites.

Peace and Love

~> Lifted

loved it. simply as that. a poem doesn't even have to be long to be good and you've proved it.