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| MarvellousMarvin 2007-05-05 ch 1,  | abusei love the almost surrealist element to this, and esecially the "impatient scent". it's a really good piece! |
| dolce-gal 2007-04-12 ch 1, | abuseI loved the contradictions throughout. The dark, the light; the wet, the dry. Really nice flow throughout as well. |
| Falcon0Rider 2007-04-09 ch 1, | abuseOoh, I like this. It's flow is amazing. It draws the reader in! Greay job! Falcon |
| Jordygirl 2007-04-09 ch 1, | abuseIt's really really beautiful. But I have no idea what it's about. Love lost? Missing somebody? An old friend? Nature? please review me! |