i love the almost surrealist element to this, and esecially the "impatient scent". it's a really good piece!

I loved the contradictions throughout. The dark, the light; the wet, the dry. Really nice flow throughout as well.

Ooh, I like this. It's flow is amazing. It draws the reader in! Greay job!

Falcon

It's really really beautiful.

But I have no idea what it's about.
Love lost?
Missing somebody?
An old friend?
Nature?

please review
me!