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| xXBe.My.ObsessionXx 2008-01-03 ch 3, | It's great so far! I've actually gotta go so I can't keep on reading but I will as soon as I can. =] |
| ihrtbks 2007-05-30 ch 7, | Nice story. Poor Leona has lost just about all the males in her family...both her brothers and her father. Could you please put a character list up? There's a lot of names in this story. I think it would also help if you put the story in left-alignment instead of center. Center makes it a little difficult to read. But if they're in high school (am I assuming too much), wouldn't somebody say something if they slept together (the clean way but others don't know that)? UPDATE SOON! |
| FoolofaTook17 2007-04-25 ch 3, | i really like this story, all the characters seem very realistic, like you could actually go to school with them, or know someone like them and they also have awesome tastes in movies =) |
| MandyMisfit 2007-04-10 ch 1, | Very good. The dialoge seems very real which many writers lack. Cute name for the dog, seems like a very good story plot...be sure to finish it. |