Oh my... Love this poem...

Wow! *applause* This poem is incredible. It is so well written, the rhyme scheme, the diction, everything. I think it has such an awesome message & resolution to it. It is excellent. Great Job!

You say it right over and over again!

hmmm. liked your poem.

Very Very awesome poem.. You review lots of my stuff so I was happy to review yours..

I don't blame you. I'm kind of like the person you are referring to and I try to be better. But i'll also say that jealousy has a way of weaving through a man more than anything else in this world.

I know just how you feel. People ask how your day was or if there's something wrong, but the fact is they don't want to hear it, they're just asking to be polite. I hate it when they do that. However, I refuse to keep my mouth shut. _ Sneaky little devil eh? Anyway, if they want to talk to me, they have to be prepared to listen the very next day. Good Luck!

sad, but really good!

Finally, someone who can make a rhymescheme like this actually work for serious material. And I thought it was impossible. Brilliant.

this was excellent