I LOVED this chapter! It was my FAVORITE of all of them! GREAT JOB! (I just wish that what I'd read of the third book had been clean.)
YOU ROCK LIKE GIBRALTOR!
BLUE
PS: No, it's actually me, The.Wizard.Pen.Dragon, and I had an extra account lying around because I have ... 5 email addresses? So I thought I'd do this, hope it doesn't make your head big!

You just LOVE sequels don't 'cha? Well, this needs a TON of grammar and spelling help, but then again I already knew that wasn't your strong suit! It WAS hilarious though, and I don't know how you manage to write so much, I always get tons of great ideas in my head but end up abandoning them because I'm writing something else I write REALLY slow! oh, it was AWESOME though!
Write on!
Pen.Dragon

Ah, I'm glad I found out why B.I. had his identity blocked. It all makes sense now!

lol, GO CHOCOLATE! CHOCOLATE IS AWESOME! I will have to keep in mind that if I'm ever attacked by killer shrimp, and I don't have any lasagna on hand, I should use chocolate.

haha, this story was awesome!

What the heck? 'Frank and the shrimp king both began slow-motion Kung-Fu-Fighting in mid air.' hahahahahahahahahahahahahah!

Yay! Frank killed the Shrimp King! -little munchkins from The Wizard of Oz come out and begin singing- Ding, dong! The shrimp is dead! SQUEE!

OMG! (I say that to much. And the word 'Siriusly', which I didn't even come up with. Meh.) B.I. IS A WERESHRIMP! -trying not to laugh at what I just typed- That is very weird, this is the only story I have read were anyone would have said 'wereshrimp'. XD

Yay! B.I. lives!

Haha, this was one of my favorite quotes: "And what about the huge neon sign that says, THE SHRIMP KING IS HERE?" Siriusky, how could anyone miss that?

OMG! WHAT HAPPENED TO B.I.?! I NEED TO FIND OUT!!

Anyway, the cahpter was REALLY FUNNY! As usual.

OMG! Will Bob surrvive the intellectual conversation?? I must read to find out! And to findout if B.I. lives!

OMG! Will the killer shrimp eat B.I.? Hmm...

I should stop thinking and read the next chapter.

Wow, those killer shrimp are VICIOUS! And Sheryl needs to have better aim. XD

hahahaha, that president is SO stupid!

Siriusly, "Well for goodness sakes, don't shout at me just because your gardener got fathered by a shrimp named Bob."? lol!

"This story is crap! The characters are unreal, the plot is too slow, or non existent, and the joke aren't even funny!"

Just kidding. But you put the option on your page, and I couldn't resist.

Siriusly now, (and that's supposed to be spelled 'siriusly'. Ya know, as in Sirius Black. GO HARRY POTTER!) this is funny. And so random... GO RANDOMNESS!

Poor Bob! He needs to be less trusting! And less sympathetic towards roadside salespeople.

Hey. I love this, it made my day. you rock! and to ms. critic...

we are writing, but the school cockblocked ficitionpress on our laptops...

lame-o


I want to be a were-shrimp.



but then i could never got to red lobster...


But i still would have culver's..



so i still want to be a were-shrimp

I hate B.I.