lol I choose names randomally XD

ha ha a punk in a ballet class! XD
I'm still laughing!

ha lol
Guys with a British accent are hot to me! ;D
Great job on explaining everything, and I saw nothing that was wrong in it. ^_^

wow with a capitol W. :O
lol I love the details in the story! ^_^

Your story is looking good and your most recent chapter is the best yet so far. Keep up the great work, I'm supporting you all the way Derek.

Nice detail of Shaun Moretti.

Revan sounds mighty interesting. Could he be the other leading role I suppose?

I love this boy's sense of humour and style. From reading this so far you've thought a lot about his character.

Promising.

Oh.
What's gonna happen next love?

OMFG! i was actually griping really tightly to the mouse when reading this, it actualy feels liek youre there. your details are really precise. i love you :):):)
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read your author's note, that's dead strange! :D:D:D your writing is MINTMINTMINTMINT, dead envious (Y)

i like the sound of Revan, nice name too where'd you get that from?
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lololollololl :):):) i was actually in awe of all these metaphors you use, they're proper funny :D
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LMAO he's got character, i actually like him :):):) (Y) you write really realy well
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