| Reviews for When You Wish Upon a Star |
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catalyst.enigma 5/3/08 . chapter 1Beauty in every line. |
Nine-Black-Roses 4/10/07 . chapter 1wow this is a really sad poem its strtong and you have some really good metaphors x |
Ashelin 4/10/07 . chapter 1This poem really hit home for me. It was intense to read and hurt a lot. Just the feelings you've brought back in your simple words and phrases. "The stars will dampen beneath my gaze" or "While the stars are killing crickets/(And the hopeful songs they carry.) Especially this one: "Someday these words will reach you/And you'll realize that your happiness was all that mattered,/(Even if it killed me a little inside.) Great job. |