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| catalyst.enigma 2008-05-03 ch 1, | Beauty in every line. |
| Nine-Black-Roses 2007-04-10 ch 1, | wow this is a really sad poem its strtong and you have some really good metaphors x |
| Ashelin 2007-04-10 ch 1, | This poem really hit home for me. It was intense to read and hurt a lot. Just the feelings you've brought back in your simple words and phrases. "The stars will dampen beneath my gaze" or "While the stars are killing crickets/(And the hopeful songs they carry.) Especially this one: "Someday these words will reach you/And you'll realize that your happiness was all that mattered,/(Even if it killed me a little inside.) Great job. |