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Reviews For: When You Wish Upon a Star

catalyst.enigma
2008-05-03
ch 1,
Beauty in every line.
Nine-Black-Roses
2007-04-10
ch 1,
wow this is a really sad poem
its strtong and you have
some really good metaphors
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Ashelin
2007-04-10
ch 1,
This poem really hit home for me. It was intense to read and hurt a lot. Just the feelings you've brought back in your simple words and phrases. "The stars will dampen beneath my gaze" or "While the stars are killing crickets/(And the hopeful songs they carry.)

Especially this one:

"Someday these words will reach you/And you'll realize that your happiness was all that mattered,/(Even if it killed me a little inside.)

Great job.
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