something trying to hold on to something that no longer exists, then finally caves in cause it can no longer continue with the burden. I like the use of the dove, its a beautiful bird and the fact that it is caring a dead relative shows concience inside of the bird. awing for the death of its loved one. its loss. but finally lets go.

Good symbolism, my friend :)

you better get to work on that story. I shall hound you, but try to tone it down enough to not tick you off. Happy writing!

that is a pretty unique event you witnessed, and the humanity of the dove was striking. did this truely happen? either way this is a great poem because it catches the reader's heart. it is interesting how you took the event, to "let go of what is gone", a lot of insight.

Wow... I think this is the best poem you have ever written, although I saw none, but whatever it may lack in technique you certainly made up for in message.

Awwh... that's kind of sad. And cute too. I can't believe a bird would do that. Humans just call the police or somebody and have them take care of it.. that is soo, so cute. But yeah.. Letting go of what's gone would do you some good.