I like this. Its creepy, but very thought provoking. I like the way this was written and worded. Nicely done! Thanks for the review.

This was pretty cool, kind of creepy, but still cool!! You should add some chapters onto this maybe about the house's history and other people's encounters with it. This was nothing short of amazing, so keep writing:)
~**Heart of the RubyFire**

interesting

Whoa O.o that story was awesome.

Cool! Creepy, but cool! ;P

Brilliant plot, this one! How many people say they live in a 'freaky' house? They should read about this one. They'd probably never set foot in said house again ...

Well written. Very descriptive and the symbolic murder of her clone was cool, too!
Loved it! Keep writing!

I like this story, the plot seems good. My only problem is that I have to agree with your third reviewer. It seems like you are trying too hard to use really descriptive words, like you have thesaurus in front of you. That leads to misuse of words. but other than that, keep on writing.

Hello! Wow, this was a very interesting thing to read. It had some very wise words in it. I loved the symbolism of her killing her other half, the half that was depressed or whatever you want to call it.
Anyway, super great job. Keep up the good work!

Plot is interesting, and the characters seem reaalistic enough, however you often misuse words and your descriptiong and dialog lack emotion.

"It meant that she was, quite literally, in the belly of the beast," My favorite quote from this story. This was amazing, I don't know if I have the words to explain how much I liked it. It was very expressive, and very clever. Great job.

That's pretty creepy... The only thing I didn't like was that you specifically wrote "flashback", when you could have just implied it, or italicized it... I liked the rest of it. Now I'm going to be scared to go to sleep. Anyways, good job.