wow. this is deep. depression is horrible.

Wow, it's so poetic and full of drama!

Beautiful poem. I just got an account on this site. I was hoping that you would review some of my work (i do poetry too). Truly excellent poem.

that's a depressive stuff really.

The thing is, this doesn't feel like it has any humanity or emotion to it. All these statements and pretty descriptions make it interesting, but it's missing something big. Expanding this might make it better.

And that's a bad thing. I'm infatuated with the rythm and style and even wording of this poem. Not to sound generic or anything. Sorry if I am.