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| Yellowierd0 2007-04-15 ch 1,   | That is so so true... And I know what it feels like to be in that position. Definite fave. That was a very good message you put out. |
| flashlitdarknessxx 2007-04-13 ch 1, | wow...this is very deep. excellent job |
| Poetchic 2007-04-12 ch 1, | i am deeply saddend by this poem but its true in retrospect. Emo is only a label just as jock or nerd is one. did anybody bother looking benaeth the balck makeup? |
| Taltush/MeiMei 2007-04-12 ch 1, | That's sort of intense. It's written very clearly and solidly (if that makes sense). To me, it means that it's not overly pretty but it's not meaningless either. I like that. It's very well-written. There's one typo: "deelply". Probably "deeply". Anyways, great job. |
| PocoSnow15 2007-04-11 ch 1, | Beautiful, so frickin amazing (as always, Serenity!). This is so true, I know people who's life you just summed up in this poem...it's so scary...so, so scary. Awesome, really well done. I loved it! |
| lordelfy 2007-04-11 ch 1, | aww this is really sad, but i agree with you on the labels thing. People really shouldn't label other and just let them live their own life without any unwanted interruption...or something like that! Nice poem i really liked the flow@@ |
| flies.like.decay. 2007-04-11 ch 1, | I know the feeling, ha ha. If I ever wanted to come out, it would have been a waste of time and a shame because everybody was already calling me a **. Got pushed around a lot for that and one of my "friends" defaced my poetry notebook, ha ha. Wrote Gay Prick all over the cover. Red cover, black ink. It was kind of... upsetting, if you know what I mean. **... Some one told me I looked like a hooker once... Lol. The association... it's so ** great. |
| hateandkill-D 2007-04-11 ch 1, | ...nice... Great job on this! |