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| R. Louise 2007-05-02 ch 1, | abuseThe rhythm and flow here are amazing. It feels like it rhymes... but it doesn't. Great work. |
| The Monkey King of Pirates 2007-04-17 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful! I am going to add this to my favs and to my C2! *TSP |
| In the Rye 2007-04-12 ch 1, | abuse"Wooden sticks light as shafts" Makes no sense. Shaft of lead? Of metal? Of wood? Learn English. |