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| Reptar Bars 2008-10-20 ch 1, | "God does not live in my house." Great line. Greater piece. |
| Rooftops 2007-04-13 ch 1, | your story makes me feel very guilty you know. I have my uni entrance exams in 6 weeks, and i've never studied that hard! Apart from that I like the description + sympathise with the character, good job! |
| DeepBlueEcho 2007-04-12 ch 1, | hey, i really like this. this was exactly what i was feeling just last night. its really descriptive and well-written. i can picture it well. |