i love the first stanza of this.
the rest didn't appeal to me that much.

I like the whole idea of beginning with a puzzle and then ending with a puzzle and the middle is nice too

The format, the wording, and your expressions are great for the topic of this piece. Very nicely done!

The structure of the poem as a whole seemed just a tad bit off, which hurt the cohesiveness of the whole peice. I did like what you're portraying here, though. I also liked the way you ended it, the last stanza is my favorite.

haha this poem is sad T__T
i was thinking about writing a poem about a puzzle but i didnt know how.

Awesome poem. I love the style. I especially like the first stanza.

this speaks my situation
or perhaps i am reflecting myself upon it


is there ever a perfect image
are we striving for it, are we it without knowing
perfect does not exist in a perfect world.

aw yeah love is a confuzzling puzzle that never ever ends. sad eh? ah well nice work.

Man, I felt like that forever it seemed. I loved this poem, the imagery and everything. I like relating things to puzzles and puzzle pieces, because life seems like a puzzle a lot. Great job.

puzzling. lol. a nice read.

hmm, you're right this is a puzzling piece, i can't seem to connect them together as well, maybe it's your whole point.
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I like how the words intertwine in this, and kind of become representative of the title and the theme. The emotion is specific and relatable, therefore it draws in the reader. Well written.

Good poem. I like the meaning to it. Keep writing.

really liked the metaphor

(formatting is cool- four stanzas, four words each)

"triangular insertion without feeling/was there a perfect fit?"- gosh i loved that

excellent job :)

Beautiful. The whole feel of the poem works, sort of a discombobulated feel . . . trying to twist the words of the poem in order to make it work. Reminds me of when I was a little girl . . . my dad and I used to work on puzzles a lot together. Wonderful write. Keep writing, k.