Superb, and intelligent. Takes a little thought to understand, and brings a slight morbidness and makes it a happiness. Very appreciated.

Very nice. I quite liked it.

This has such a cool feeling to it.
I like it a lot.

I loved this, it really showed your friendship to the reader. I especially love the stanzas "then you start to smile/a little, cry a little,/die a little" I totally related. Great job.

the feeling is very light...
nice.. this makes the poem a feel-good one :)