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| Red Rose 2007-04-14 ch 2, anon. | abuseNo fast food place for me? Gasp. :P Nice little thing you've put together. Though I do believe it could be even better, especially the first chap. It was bit weak in my eyes. You personal comments and such were awesome though |
| The Melody of a Broken Hear... 2007-04-13 ch 1, | abuseWow... I umm umm what to say about this... "Look a donut!" *runs away while you're not looking* |
| acriter 2007-04-13 ch 1, | abuseVery funny. I'm liking the randomness. |