Omg.
That was so beautiful. And so sad.
I aplaude you. ^-^ You are so effing kewl! ^-^

Not bad! It was well-written. You could do more of this. Why was it untitled?*_*

x/ Dark Snow Angel /x

Wow! Great job! That was so sad, I can't believe it! I've watched movies about stuff like that, but this was so real. Awesome, awesome and really well done!

I loved it!It made me cry *chibi tears*.Keep up the great work.

Wow, I've never read anything like this before, and I love it! I end up feeling for both characters.

Peace and Love

~> Lifted

Wow, very heart-felt and beautifully written. Lovely formatting. =] Keep up the great work. -Sara

Ooh, that was sad! But it was good. I didn't really like the first few stanzas (what a cool word) so maybe you could look over them and find something that works.