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| concerto49 2007-08-05 ch 1, | abuseWe often do write on inspiration. Some vivid and realistic portrayal of soldier life - don't underestimate yourself. We all have potential. It doesn't matter if it's correct or not - more importantly it's your perspective of it, which is what is unique and important. Was cool, though why was it all in italics? Cheers. |
| Sophia Victoria 2007-04-13 ch 1, | abuseWow, that's nicely written. The title was catching, and the grammar was flawless!:) x/Dark Snow Angel/x |
| PocoSnow15 2007-04-13 ch 1, | abuseOh wow! That was so good! I didn't realize it was a poem at first, but when I clicked it and read it, it was so amazing! I used to be pen pals with a soldier, and this sounds a lot like what his day was like. Loved your rhyming, it flowed really well. Awesome job! |