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Reviews For: A Soldiers Life

concerto49
2007-08-05
ch 1,
abuseWe often do write on inspiration.
Some vivid and realistic portrayal of soldier life - don't underestimate yourself. We all have potential. It doesn't matter if it's correct or not - more importantly it's your perspective of it, which is what is unique and important.
Was cool, though why was it all in italics?
Cheers.
Sophia Victoria
2007-04-13
ch 1,
abuseWow, that's nicely written. The title was catching, and the grammar was flawless!:)

x/Dark Snow Angel/x
PocoSnow15
2007-04-13
ch 1,
abuseOh wow! That was so good! I didn't realize it was a poem at first, but when I clicked it and read it, it was so amazing! I used to be pen pals with a soldier, and this sounds a lot like what his day was like. Loved your rhyming, it flowed really well. Awesome job!
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