That was very powerful.
It makes a lot of sense. It does. =)

HC
xx

We often do write on inspiration.
Some vivid and realistic portrayal of soldier life - don't underestimate yourself. We all have potential. It doesn't matter if it's correct or not - more importantly it's your perspective of it, which is what is unique and important.
Was cool, though why was it all in italics?
Cheers.

Wow, that's nicely written. The title was catching, and the grammar was flawless!:)

x/Dark Snow Angel/x

Oh wow! That was so good! I didn't realize it was a poem at first, but when I clicked it and read it, it was so amazing! I used to be pen pals with a soldier, and this sounds a lot like what his day was like. Loved your rhyming, it flowed really well. Awesome job!