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Pione 2008-10-06 ch 1,	abuseThe play of your words is just beautiful. :) I love this.
Arre 2008-09-05 ch 1,	abuse'rip it to shreds' i dont think i could if i tried. its wonderfully written. So true to life too. great job
english summer rain 2008-07-08 ch 1,	abusethis is old, but i will never, ever get sick of this. your writing is beautiful, you express yourself in ways that i could never could. i applaud you :) never stop writing.
jane speaks 2008-04-06 ch 1,	abuseI love this. I honestly, truly, whole heartedly love this. I personally have never experienced a situation like this, yet, I feel each emotion present in this piece so strongly. Very good work.
Our Lady Silence 2008-03-18 ch 1,	abuseOh... that was good. You should've submitted it to the breakfast underground's "it meant nothing". It totally would've kicked the other entry's butt.
stillgold 2008-02-16 ch 1,	abuseIt's funny because I think the beauty of this one-shot is not simply that it's written well, or that the emotions are so powerful and yet so hidden, but that this applies to everything, even friendships. This hit home for me because my ex-best friend and I recently went through it—and I realised that even platonic relationships can go through this. You know? It's hard to explain. Very nice, overall. :)
ThePerfectImperfection 2008-02-08 ch 1,	abuseAh, Miss Kendal, it is near and dear to me too. All-too-familiar, in many ways. But I like it. It's a good piece of writing, and I think amongst all of the make-ups and break-ups that happen on the pages of this sight, the real ones, the ones with the gray lines and the idea that intense closure is so much harder and takes so much longer than it seems, are sadly misrepresented. :) -K
paradiie 2008-01-21 ch 1,	abusei've read this so many times. and every time, it rips my heart open and i see something new.
TinuvielDork 2007-11-10 ch 1,	abusedang. This is incredibly good. I love writing one-shots, but none of mine come close to this. You have so much in this that we understand what went on between them, but you didn't have to spell it out. I like that. I loved the line you used as the summary for this. "What girl doesn't want the fairy tale? Try to find one. You won't. And if she says she doesn't, she's probably a liar. Some of us talk a good game, but in the end, all we want is to be loved. Even me." Brilliant. And so true. Much love...Tin
Trishcbury 2007-10-11 ch 1,	abusevery cool. i like the way she figures it out as she's talking to him, the way you described the cigarette crackling, and how you said he measured and analyzed everything he said. (i know i do that.)
984446649 2007-08-24 ch 1,	abuseHah. I love it.
Rhapsodized 2007-08-06 ch 1,	abuseI love how perfectly I can see that happening to anyone. This story has no flaws. I completely adore it (:
cheesecake.thief 2007-07-20 ch 1,	abuseSo much possibilities, so many 'what if's...' I heart it :)
Allie 2007-06-17 ch 1, anon.	abuseWell, this isn't really a review but I must say that you touched me deeper than anything ever has. How exactly your story mirrors the death of my own relationship shocked me and filled me with this inexplicable empathy. Thank you for sharing this. The story itself was well-written. You could have flooded it with emotion, but you kept it honest yet curt [English isn't really my forte and I amn't good at expressing my feelings in words :)]. Keep up the excellent work!
BlackPetal 2007-05-07 ch 1,	abuseWow, this is (to my surprise) really good. It's short, yet simple. It' nothing at all what I expected, yet you know what? That's probably one of the reasons why I loved it so much. When you can take a cliché and turn it into something unique, you've got talent. And, needless to say, m'dear, you've got talent.

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