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| Xerophyte 2007-09-27 ch 1,  | abuseThat's really interesting. The story seems so simple, but has so many implications. I like that. Oh, and the name Vladimir...love that too :D |
| xDancingintheRainx 2007-08-05 ch 1, | abuseI do love strawberry ice cream. This piece made me smile. Very cute and fluffy, but a great piece all the same. Well done! |
| RaindropsOnBlackRoses 2007-07-03 ch 1, | abuseThat was fluffy as a cloud but I loved it! The dialog was great. |
| Her Wishing Well 2007-05-31 ch 1, | abuseCute, and sweet. Well done. |
| call me ish 2007-04-22 ch 1, | abusetis cute, and yeah, we all need a bit of clouds and rainbows, it reminds us that all those bad memories had good times as well. things like this keep us smiling, and the world moving. (and strawberry icecream? umyeah, hardcore love) |
| tad zendollllllllllllllllll... 2007-04-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseWAIT. THEY HAVE ICE CREAM WITH STRAWBERRIES IN IT? WTH SINCE WHEN? i need to get summa that. :) okay so. hi i'm jack. sup oh and: REVIEW PART OF THE REVIEW- this is cute. :) and how does someone smile into your neck and you feel it? o.o |
| sweets555 2007-04-14 ch 1, | abuseaww...i love fluff...great job! and ice cream should always be included |
| Taltush/MeiMei 2007-04-14 ch 1, | abuseYou're a bit too fond of the name, eh? Heh. Anyways, one: How'd you upload this?! Two: Wow, that IS fluffy. And made me strangely hungry for ice-cream (though I'm freezing and sick...). Okay. But fluff is fun sometimes. This is just really cute. |
| DEADLYpoisonous 2007-04-14 ch 1, | abusei love it, its so cute and real. |
| dare2beme01 2007-04-14 ch 1, | abusei thought it was very cute! go into more detail but other than that, its really well written... |
| DemonicTruths 2007-04-14 ch 1, | abuseAw, that's so cute! How old are they though? The sound like they're 10. Very adorable one-shot. |