Reviews for Aimlessly Walking

TwilightButterfly 2008-07-05 ch 1,	abuse'Aimlessly walking Nowhere to go People surround me But no one I know Don't know what's ahead me Or care what's behind A place in this direction Is calling to my mind." Those are the best lines of this. I feel this way whenever I'm surrounded by people I don't know. You captured the mood perfectly.
jrsparkus 2008-03-08 ch 1,	abuseawesome, i love it! there's another person on here is is just as good as you, their name is Fleur de l'est, and their pretty good. c ya at school... bye! PILLOW PILLOW PILLOW (sorry, inside joke)
JaviJavi 2008-03-07 ch 1,	abusethis is a really good poem. I really like how it can be personal to a lot of different people including myself.
Daughter of the Faeries 2008-01-21 ch 1,	abuseI really like this poem a lot. I think it could use a little more punctuation to make it easier to read and pause in the right places, but the rhyme was great.
Lurid Black 2008-01-11 ch 1,	abuseSweet, you've managed to rhyme words with a perfect match, in such short lines, very talented, keep writing! ~Lurid~
The Monkey King of Pirates 2007-04-14 ch 1,	abuseYou did a beautiful job once again! (TSP)