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rainbowboysxoxo 2009-06-02 . chapter 1
Aww I loved it! It was so cute :)
I liked the vietnamese and english mix, it made it more realistic. Good job!
frogs of war 2009-05-08 . chapter 1
Your translations were nicely done. I know someone who got his hand caught in farming machinery. He would have died without medical attention. Minh is lucky to have full use of his hand.

I love the way you mix the languages and cultures. With your descriptions I could see and hear Saigon.

Minh was too good at playing innocent. Poor Wes he took forever to get a clue, but poor Giang. He thought Minh would eventually be his.
neeree 2009-02-17 . chapter 1
I liked the translations. They really did add to the whole experience. I didn't get some of the explanations...like the bed, and the sugar cane machine. But overall it had a very good vibe, and I liked it. Will you ever do a sequel? Maybe Minh coming to America?
Poptart Guava Kid 2009-02-05 . chapter 1
it was awesome! very well written ;D
MacKitty 2009-02-01 . chapter 1
i like the translations :D

i also like how realistic it seems. most of your stories seem very realistic. :) nick and jay made me sad though...:( it was still good >
i-see-faeries 2009-01-17 . chapter 1
Aw, how cute. This was really nice. A bit random and vague on details, but nice. I like it!
Helizabeth 2009-01-04 . chapter 1
aw! that was so cute! i loved it!
jaybey 2008-07-07 . chapter 1
All my reviews are going to sound the same. But, yay, yay, yay, yay! And you're awesome, seriously. And it all sounded so authentic and beautiful. I've never been to Vietnam but I've seen photos of it and from your descriptions I got a real sense of what it was like there...even if a lot of it was just sort of atmospheric. I loved that Minh was wise to it the whole time...cheeky bastard, and really hope it ends well for them...poor Giang though, I hope he manages to find happiness too, I know I'd absolutely die of excite if there's a follow up story for him, but, hey, that may not be how you work, and sometimes, loose ends are nice...or at least provocative, which, when done well, is so much better...
Fei 2007-09-17 . chapter 1
Aww, so cute. Vietnamese boy-love... uber sexy xD
Hmm... one thing I noticed is you said "Toi yeu em" for I love you. It should be "anh yeu em" I think (my vietnamese isn't great, but "em yeu anh" is one of the few things I do remember).
I liked the way you wrote this, it made me smile. I liked Minh alot (but I am weak for cute Vietnamese boys hehe)
Anyway, it was very cute :)
mia5081 2007-08-18 . chapter 1
Aw, that was so cute =) I'm going to pretend that they stay together for the rest of their lives lol
Great job!
~Mia
Aya 2007-08-10 . chapter 1
oh my god! you must write a sequel to this!
Either way, in my head, I see Minh and Wes together later
in life. =]
Holy Trin 2007-06-15 . chapter 1
Very sweet. I especially liked Minh... but maybe Giang could have his own story too? Pretty please :D

Xx
Amindaya 2007-05-12 . chapter 1
So cute! Loved Minh.
Sinister Slash 2007-04-16 . chapter 1
aww this is so adorable! Minh is such a cutie. Accents are hot
Kailum 2007-04-15 . chapter 1
Wow that was really good. And really cute. I enjoyed that a lot ^_^ Too bad he has to go back T_T;;
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