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| Fei 2007-09-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseAww, so cute. Vietnamese boy-love... uber sexy xD Hmm... one thing I noticed is you said "Toi yeu em" for I love you. It should be "anh yeu em" I think (my vietnamese isn't great, but "em yeu anh" is one of the few things I do remember). I liked the way you wrote this, it made me smile. I liked Minh alot (but I am weak for cute Vietnamese boys hehe) Anyway, it was very cute :) |
| mia5081 2007-08-18 ch 1,  | abuseAw, that was so cute =) I'm going to pretend that they stay together for the rest of their lives lol Great job! ~Mia |
| Aya 2007-08-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseoh my god! you must write a sequel to this! Either way, in my head, I see Minh and Wes together later in life. =] |
| Holy Trin 2007-06-15 ch 1, | abuseVery sweet. I especially liked Minh... but maybe Giang could have his own story too? Pretty please :D Xx |
| Amindaya 2007-05-12 ch 1, | abuseSo cute! Loved Minh. |
| Sinister Slash 2007-04-16 ch 1, | abuseaww this is so adorable! Minh is such a cutie. Accents are hot |
| Kailum 2007-04-15 ch 1, | abuseWow that was really good. And really cute. I enjoyed that a lot ^_^ Too bad he has to go back T_T;; |
| magalina 2007-04-15 ch 1, | abuseSo cute... You should write so long stories! This was great! Keep it up! |
| xXxMoonlitexXx 2007-04-15 ch 1, | abuseI think it was a great love story it's definitely going in my favs. |