|Reviews for Solid Ground|
| Counting Petals 4/20/07 . chapter 1
I liked it, except I thought that "new golden leaf" would sound better than "golden new leaf". *shrugs*
| CrazyTurtles 4/16/07 . chapter 1
I like it. It just feels true, like we all do that smometimes. Anyway, keep up the good work.
| Ashelin 4/15/07 . chapter 1
The line "and disgust that boils in your heart." kind of creeped me out because I got this nasty feeling from it. I can relate a lot though. I seriously loved it, great job.
| a silenced revolution 4/15/07 . chapter 1
Did you mean "solid" ground? (Or is that annoying to point out?)
When you said "close my eyes and jump" I immediately thought "oh no, suicide". But I'm glad it didn't turn out that way. Nice work as always.
| Dani P 4/15/07 . chapter 1
great poem (again) however i think you meant solid not soil ground.