hey, this is really neat! i like it!

Uh... I really like the story and stuff, but in this chapter you kept mixing up your pronouns, like she and He, her and him, stuff like that. It was... weird...

Ah, so many different characters! It's hard to find one to like so far! This will definitely be interesting. I love building up and learning about characters. It helps me with my own works!

I'll be eagerly awaiting you next chapter!

this is an okay story for now and the plot is good, but i must ask how long before he gets older? I feel odd reading about someone so young *shrugs* but otherwise it's good.

:) There short chapters, but not too bad

This is definitely interesting. Beautifully written and well-developed characters and plot. I'll have to watch this one, it's very interesting. *puts on alerts* Perhaps if you have the time, you could take a look at some of my works.

This is curious. I have to complain though. I have a policy of reviewing anyone who does stuff to psycho and you have virtually nothing. Ah. I like the plot and characters though, but am unsure as to what could happen once he'ss.