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| Carmel March 2008-05-25 ch 16,  | abuseWow, really great chapter. Full of everything that makes me adore this story. I'm so sorry it's taken me this long to read it! Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter :) ~Carm~ |
| Death Tastes Like Cherries 2008-05-10 ch 16, | abuseher family. sorry it took me so long to read this. i didnt know you had updated. my computer is being mentally handicapped. |
| ElevatorMusic 2008-05-04 ch 16, | abuseYay! Ive finally caught up..how sad it took me THIS long. Im so lazy. BTW I hope there's more Edward. I do kinda, Well no I don't like Leon. I like Edward. Edwards awesome. Is there more Edward soon? Good job. Keep writting. |
| rosieroo 2008-04-27 ch 16, | abusewow leon and vi are happy again! great chapter, update soon! please? |
| Kittydog Lover 2008-04-24 ch 16, | abuseOld life. I don't really care about Leon. I think he acts like a jerk and then knows that Viola will go right back to him. Love Edward though. Love Viola when she isn't pineing over every boy. Well Edward is ok for her to like, but not Leon. Anywho... Old life and Update SOON! |
| ElevatorMusic 2008-04-24 ch 12, | abuseI like Edward...hes pretty :) |
| Faith Adeline 2008-04-23 ch 16, | abuseI liked this chapter, it was good :) Uh...for the question...I'd like to see both :) haha. But if I had to choose, I'd choose family. Family tends to have a lot with the way you are. So. Yeah. Keep it up and update soon! Faith |
| That One Dork, Stacey :] 2008-04-23 ch 16, anon. | abuseOh and, More about their former relationship :] |
| That One Dork, Stacey :] 2008-04-23 ch 16, anon. | abuseYAY! u updated! :] keep up the good work :] |
| A.V.Mackie 2008-04-23 ch 16, | abuseYay, you're back! Very interesting chappy, got to see a lot more of Viola's history, which was cool, and to answer your reviewer question I'd like to see more of her family and life history. Just a random thought though, how long ago was the Sandman series written and how long ago is the history bits of the story set? *nit-picks* :D Oh and have I forgotten something in this story or does your comment about Death and Mary Poppins have something to do with "Sweet Miseria",, or is it just crazy talk? Colour me confuzzled either way. O_o |
| Death Tastes Like Cherries 2008-04-16 ch 10, | abuseAlways trying to kill Viola off... Did you get her name from Viola Swamp? She's from a children's book, called Miss Nelson. Basically the teacher, Miss Nelson, is really nice and the kids are brats. The teacher goes on vacation for awhile and is replaced by this hard ass bitch Viola Swamp. lol. |
| Death Tastes Like Cherries 2008-04-16 ch 8, | abuseyou know what song this reminds me of? I Against I by Massive Attack. |
| Death Tastes Like Cherries 2008-04-16 ch 7, | abuseoh shit, you're not killing her off already? geez, it's a little early for that. |
| Death Tastes Like Cherries 2008-04-16 ch 6, | abusei thought there would be many more words... i like the part where she was all like "she could handle herself" this song entered my head the next line being..." but if i get lonely i made need your help" Edward's help? heh heh heh |
| Death Tastes Like Cherries 2008-04-16 ch 5, | abuseI just love the way you end your chapters! Oh, I wrote that already. HUm (I'm thinking)..You have an extra "a" in front of Lycanthrope in teh last sentence/statement |