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annushka 2009-10-09 . chapter 7
glad to see you back! I really hope that you'll be able to write again, even if I don't expect you to be as prolific as you once were (life is that way that you also need to earn a lving and so on...).
This story is quite funny. I hope that you'll go on, but also dig a little deeper than the light banter that we have seen so far. The main characters seem interesting on the surface, but I was somehow surprised by the role reversal (the assertive one is not the one we are expecting at the beginning, and his motive from retiring from the dating world for 2 years is hazy, especially compared to the self assured attitude he displays on their 1st actual meeting), and it would be nice to see their character being a little more unveiled and explained.
Crimsonoaks 2009-09-14 . chapter 7
wow im loving this story already! I hope you can find the time to write the next chapter *hinthint*
Willow Fern 2009-09-05 . chapter 7
This review is for 6 and 7 cause I just read them together! I'm glad you're continuing this story. I started reading it however many eons ago when you started it and put it on my email alerts. So, imagine my surprise when I received an email you had picked it back up!! YAY! And I'm about to go check out your Yahoo group =) Keep on going! Can't wait for the next update
Silly-girl15 2009-09-02 . chapter 7
Good story :)
→nonsense rambler← 2009-09-02 . chapter 1
let's celebrate the 'reincarnation' of one of the best of the best of the best of all the best and the best author of all time in fp! Welcome back idol..♂+♂..
Desmond.Ry 2009-09-01 . chapter 1
Great Story Esquirella!
I can't wait for the next chapter. :D
Please Update Soon.
Thanks.
SkyLark555 2009-08-29 . chapter 7
I love your story so far can't wait for the next chapter
Not Yet Knowing 2009-08-29 . chapter 7
cool...heh...keep going ...this is keeping my afternoons calm and happy...
Bexy31 2009-08-29 . chapter 7
This story is really cute ^_^ I love how shy Cam is, he he. He's adorable ^_^ Looking forwards to the next chapter :D Please keep up the good work!
Cari Marie 2009-08-29 . chapter 7
Ahaha! To funny! I can't wait to see what happens on Derek and Romaine! I am so excited to see what happens! Your story is soo cute!

May inspiration and free time flow,
Cari Marie
JtheChosen1 2009-08-29 . chapter 7
Is that a real show?!?!? Thats awesome!

Great chapter!
Platinumfrost 2009-08-29 . chapter 7
Really loving this story so far, great characters! Although, this chapter was a little short. Still loved it!
MAGICAL.NARRATOR. 2009-08-28 . chapter 7
haha... I didn't know there was a gay channel.

*runs to go find it
=]
Cari Marie 2009-08-28 . chapter 6
I'm so glad to see that you're writing again! I was really impressed with how seamless you're story is- the tone stayed the same and it flowed really well. I love Cameron's character. I think he is super cute and adorable. Patrick needs to take good care of him :} I can't wait to see more!

May inspiration and free time flow,
Cari Marie
AlphaBeatKayGee 2009-08-27 . chapter 6
Ooh. Can't wait til their date. I want to see more interaction between them! Update soon!
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