Great ending. I'm a sucker for great endings.

Keep writing!

One of my faves. You really captured how fast these things can go. Kudos.

This is so lovely-bold in the moment. I apologize for not reviewing it sooner. It brings me back to similar instances and experiences that I've had. For that I thank you. This will reside on my favorites. Marvelously reminescent tone. Hope all is well with you. MD:77.

life moves fast
but it moves so slow if think of it as minutes
rather than moments.

How could you not be in love with you after you read this? This was really very good. The descriptions, the use of time and fragment sentences...awesome awesome.

The descriptions in this are pure and powerful. And mentioning car crashes...I dunno, gave me this tingly feeling.

Hello. Yay, it's been a while since you posted! :D Wonderfully visual. I love your play with words, like with the "wilting window-sills". It's true, people change so quickly. You captured this so beautifully, really. I love the use of distinct images and the change that they go through, instead of just saying "he changed she changed". Which is awesome.
I hope you keep writing and posting! Thanks for the read. :D