 Secretive Visions 2007-07-14 . chapter 3you are so amazing, were these actual post-it notes? because I do the same thing, i make random postit notes of my life. And some of these i really identified with. amazing job. really, amazing, I favoriting this. |
 Melos Atriensis 2007-07-11 . chapter 10'if i throw my dreams away,
will you catch them for me?'
Desperate, but bitter, and slightly pleading- very nice. I love the images you've created!
.:Scarlett:. |
 Bleached Roses 2007-05-22 . chapter 9Interesting concept; using random words and phrases to make poetry. I'm adding this to my alert list, because the poetry here is so powerful and emotional and -real-, unlike a lot on this site that is overly-cliche. |
 Aslan Israel 2007-05-21 . chapter 9I like the idea of a pause. It feels nice. |
 Aslan Israel 2007-05-21 . chapter 8I'm not big on the cliche, bit I suppose it works. |
 Aslan Israel 2007-05-21 . chapter 7'an adenine of tears
and photographs.'
Wonderful lines. |
 Aslan Israel 2007-05-21 . chapter 6And coffee stains are hard to get rid of. |
 Aslan Israel 2007-05-21 . chapter 5I like the Shakespeare bit, but this seems to have lost its flavor. |
 Aslan Israel 2007-05-21 . chapter 4Ah, when such a simple thing incites disaster. |
 Aslan Israel 2007-05-21 . chapter 3tralala... lovely. That sounds so carefree. And I love the doubt.
'Hope we're seeing the same moon' |
 Aslan Israel 2007-05-21 . chapter 2I reread the title, and found that these are reminding me of post-it notes. Very nice. |
 Aslan Israel 2007-05-21 . chapter 1Refreshing... reads straight from the soul |
 Lost In Context 2007-05-13 . chapter 7"i could die for the words/ you'll never say"
Lovely. |
 lackluster 2007-04-27 . chapter 4simplistic. and truthful. i like it. |
 lackluster 2007-04-27 . chapter 3the last line...makes me smiles. :)
it's such pure condensed happiness, at least for me. |