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Secretive Visions 2007-07-14 . chapter 3
you are so amazing, were these actual post-it notes? because I do the same thing, i make random postit notes of my life. And some of these i really identified with. amazing job. really, amazing, I favoriting this.
Melos Atriensis 2007-07-11 . chapter 10
'if i throw my dreams away,
will you catch them for me?'

Desperate, but bitter, and slightly pleading- very nice. I love the images you've created!

.:Scarlett:.
Bleached Roses 2007-05-22 . chapter 9
Interesting concept; using random words and phrases to make poetry. I'm adding this to my alert list, because the poetry here is so powerful and emotional and -real-, unlike a lot on this site that is overly-cliche.
Aslan Israel 2007-05-21 . chapter 9
I like the idea of a pause. It feels nice.
Aslan Israel 2007-05-21 . chapter 8
I'm not big on the cliche, bit I suppose it works.
Aslan Israel 2007-05-21 . chapter 7
'an adenine of tears
and photographs.'

Wonderful lines.
Aslan Israel 2007-05-21 . chapter 6
And coffee stains are hard to get rid of.
Aslan Israel 2007-05-21 . chapter 5
I like the Shakespeare bit, but this seems to have lost its flavor.
Aslan Israel 2007-05-21 . chapter 4
Ah, when such a simple thing incites disaster.
Aslan Israel 2007-05-21 . chapter 3
tralala... lovely. That sounds so carefree. And I love the doubt.
'Hope we're seeing the same moon'
Aslan Israel 2007-05-21 . chapter 2
I reread the title, and found that these are reminding me of post-it notes. Very nice.
Aslan Israel 2007-05-21 . chapter 1
Refreshing... reads straight from the soul
Lost In Context 2007-05-13 . chapter 7
"i could die for the words/ you'll never say"

Lovely.
lackluster 2007-04-27 . chapter 4
simplistic. and truthful. i like it.
lackluster 2007-04-27 . chapter 3
the last line...makes me smiles. :)

it's such pure condensed happiness, at least for me.
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