so pretty! that does explain lonliness very well. and i just so happen to be sick right now too! loved it!

I hate being alone sometimes!!
especially at night!!
I get really freaked...
but anyway this really good captured the fear of being alone!!
good work!!
:D

this is beautiful. it really captures the essence of loneliness and the deepest fears of our hearts. definitely keep writing!!

I liked it. You and kinda have the same writing style, the whole story book theme. I was impressed with how well you described the world around you, I kept thinking you were possibily sitting in your bedroom leaning against the bed with classical music in the background, and a bookcase close at hand. Tell me if that's right? Cause if it is then your fantastic at description. Though it did get really wordy at the end. Good Job!

once again, very inspiring.. a nice write..