This is an amazing poem! It flows so amazingly and it just seems so real. I cannot express how much the beginning half clings to me and how much I wish for the rest to come to pass. Truly magnificent, a standing ovation to you, please, continue to right!

Wow!!
this is so beautiful!!
Great work!!
I love the way you wrote this!!
:D

yet again, a great poem. I liked it, nice flow.

very inspiring.. nicely done..