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| Lillian Lawliet 2008-09-07 ch 12,  | abuseI'm so glad that my friend recommended this story to me - I really love it. The transition from Lucas and Isobel's awkward, restrained civility to awkward friendship was absolutely terrific, and I do love all the characters. Except perhaps Bridget. Because that rebellious phase is seriously getting old. Anyway, I do have to say that I loved the part in the previous chapter where the guys were making fun of Isobel's "chick **." That was hilarious. Anywhoo~ I anxiously await your next update. :) |
| Emmy131 2008-09-06 ch 12, | abuseI love the unrestrained laughter! Good job with revamping an old cliche to make it hilarious. Can't wait for more! |
| flyingbikinis 2008-09-05 ch 12, | abuse! Please please update soon! |
| Make me with Beautiful Line... 2008-09-05 ch 12, | abuseyou HAVE to update quickly. this is by far one of the best i have ever read. and to end it like that? not fair i tell u! please please update, i cant stand the suspense! |
| Vidavril 2008-09-04 ch 8, | abuseyou are such a wonderful writer! I'm amazed how your story is absorbing me! |
| Vidavril 2008-09-04 ch 7, | abusejust GREAT! |
| grayviper 2008-09-04 ch 12, | abusei guess i spoke too soon in the last review about the song titles looking forward to reading the next chapter btw it may be days later but happy belated birthday! |
| grayviper 2008-09-04 ch 11, | abuserofl "chick **" priceless. this chapter was really funny and I had a great time reading it. I do in fact love the reality of your characters making them easy to relate to just like the first story i read from you "SML".Speaking of SML i recently read it again and for every chapter it had a title which was usually a song and I was wondering why this story never had that because i assumed it was your signature. I guess its time consuming any who keep on writing XOX Grayviper |
| Vidavril 2008-09-04 ch 4, | abusethis story is wonderful. i love the way you write. you're so talented! |
| Vidavril 2008-09-04 ch 2, | abuseI love it! |
| The Fire Lily 2008-09-03 ch 12, | abuseAwesome story, it just keeps getting better and better. i have you on my alerts so i wont miss a chapter. cant wait for the next update! |
| For What Its Worth 2008-09-03 ch 12, | abuseHappy birthday. What a relief she has another dress. Lucas laughing certainly does not put one's mind at ease. The dinner should be very interesting. |
| jadegreen16 2008-09-03 ch 12, | abuseWow, this story is so good, you write so well! I can't wait to read what happens next, i'm on the edge of my seat :) |
| Sae 2008-09-03 ch 12, anon. | abuse"And then he burst out laughing." ... and I had to laugh as well~ :3 XD |
| Belle 2008-09-03 ch 12, anon. | abuseWow amazing story, please update again soon! |