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| Sacred flower 2008-11-20 ch 14, | The chapter is freakin amazing! He is finally starting to realize that he's head over heels about her! And no...cliff hanger... update as soon as possible please... I'm on the edge ofmy seat! |
| Smartass Joker 2008-11-19 ch 14, | You need to update like immediately! I mean RIGHT NOW! I want to know what happens!! obviously. AMAZING story by the way!! Can't wait to see where it goes. ~Joker~ |
| spiffy 2008-11-19 ch 14, | this story is simply amazinglyawesomecantgetenough :) PLEASE WRITE MORE or i'll have to kidnapp you and force you too :) |
| Vidavril 2008-11-18 ch 14, | It's perfect. Your writting caughts me and there's no way I can stop! Congrats! |
| Lindsay 2008-11-18 ch 1, | I will seriously pay you $10 (not that much, lol) to get the next chapter out by Friday... I wish I was kidding, but I am so desperate I would consider making it twenty. |
| sunshower 2008-11-18 ch 14, | uh oh. What a cliff hanger. I felt that Xavier was on the verge of a proper explanation of Brigit but side-stepped it, am I right? Good job at keeping the tension going hahaha. |
| heavengurl899 2008-11-18 ch 14, | yay, what a great chapter! haha and very suspenful...you didn't really explain why Xavier was so upset. I mean we KNOW that Bridget doesn't like him, but he's just acted cool the whole time she does ** like that, what caused the sudden change? haha oh yea, the whole time I was reading the Xavier/Bridget section, I was thinking to myself, "I seriously hope this guy finds someone else and makes her jealous as hell!" :P oh well... I can't wait for chapter 15! Update soon :D |
| Obsession Changes Things 2008-11-17 ch 14, | OMG! This story is so good! I mean I found it on a bunch of people's favorites and decided why not give it a try and OMG! Its awsome! Cheers mate! This storry is so on my favorites now. I'm hooked. I wonder what is wrong with Isobel is it like an apendicitus? or is it her couson, or her parents, duhn duhn dum! Great cliff hager. Can't wait till you udate. Obsessed: really! ~Obsession |
| summers-end 2008-11-16 ch 14, | I loved the way this went and the way Isobel interrupted their kiss. "I'm not Zarah Jones" fit perfectly. I think Lucas's and Xavier's conversation was enlightening but I wish you'd written a little bit more about Xavier and Bridget and just given some more information about them--I'm really curious...although I think I want to know why Bridget refuses to like Xavier more than why he likes her. So please put that in an upcoming chapter! I'm really curious about Tarquin's family and how his day went and why Isobel needs to go to the hospital suddenly so please, please update soon! summers-end P.S. Congrats on the succint thing, lol |
| SecretFeelings 2008-11-16 ch 14, | >.< i hate cliffhangers, you better type faster this time T_T |
| Not Who I Look Like 2008-11-16 ch 14, | Oh my God! She's not dying is she? She CANT die! U can't let her die. |
| Eye Lof Ewe 2008-11-16 ch 11, | I love this story. It's very descriptive and well written C: But I do have a question... When the score is.. Port- 10.12 (72). Crocs- 12. 4 (76) What does the 10.12 or 12.4 mean? |
| babyonyee 2008-11-16 ch 14, | that was such a good chap! I cant wait for you to updat ur next one! they make such a good couple ^^ |
| Baby-Brat 2008-11-16 ch 14, | Hey, thanks for the quick update lol...I actually had tears in my eyes when Isobel was cryinh lol..I know pathetic lol but that scene was so emotional, anyway I had a brief for her the next morning because I saw her reaction as a bit harsh (although I know Lucas had to take the blame as he who incease her angry with that statement to Gary in the morning ) because I thought she knew Lucas and knew that he does not show emotions and often hid behinf beinf a dick but, I do hope everytime improve with these two as I am in love with them lol...I still have hope for Xavier and Bridget (hopefully she woulod come around, but not too late). ANYWAY, UPDATE SOON! |
| philosophyonacid 2008-11-16 ch 14, | so... yeah. not updating now is not an option. i am far to emotionally vested in this story for it to be healthy, which makes you responsible for my health. and unless you want me to end up in a psyche ward... you're going to have to update soon. HAHAHA. i love it. it's fabulous. you're an amazing writer and you have a way of pulling a reader in soon. a chapter well done. |