I have read this story a loooong time ago. BUT. THIS STORY IS SO GOOOD! cannot help but tell you star123 YOU ARE AMAZING!

I LOVED LOVED LOVED this story! And I think I appreciate more because I'm studying abroad in Australia and I basically found your story like an hour after coming back from the Essendon/ Kangas game. Anywayss I'm rambling. I just really appreciated it more because I actually know the culture.

Yea... but anyways it was AMAZING! You are an AWESOME writer and I loved your story

This story never gets old. I'm reading it for the second time :)

Oh Im so great! You have officially reached 30 reviews :P hehe (sometimes i feel like im too kind for my own good :D)

I loved this story by the way :P

Okay...so i know i already read this and reviewed it but I just noticed the number of reviews and think I shoudld write two more just to see 30 reviews, cos I know that's gonna look so cool! ;p

Finally getting around to reading this! I'm actually stupified as to why I waited so long...

All I can say for that is shame on me.

This was amazing (and yes, now I definitely want to see it on the big screen!). They growth Isobel and Lucas made could only have been brought on by each other. Anyone other than her, Lucas would probably be in some high celebrity marriage and being hounded. I see him being that Brangelina type of celeb couple that's always under the spotlight. But with Isobel, he's more...grounded. She seems to give him a sense of normalcy outside of the papparazzi and fans. And she's learned that while to can be independent and can hold your own against the world, it's nice to know that you have someone there to jump in when you need them too. She seems more free.

Although, I'm left a little curious about Isobel's parents NOW. With a grandchild, are they still as...aloof (?) as they were when it concerned Isobel and what she did? Thank goodness for Lucas' family.

And Quin! I think he was my favorite through this whole thing. Do I smell a new story or am I going crazy?

And now I think your next project should be to write out Shirtless in Egypt ;). I think it could be a best seller...

Oh yeah, naked Goodspeed. I haven't forgotten the comments about his stamina.

Rawr.

Oh no, the paparazzi discovered The Point? That's the saddest thing in the entire story! D:

I like how Isobel didn't seem to have real direction when the story first started (curse you, Robert Castrated) and now she's running her own business. Way to go, gurlie!

Also, at the beginning of the story Lucas' own voice wasn't really defined, but now that we reach the end, it so is. It's completely different from Isobel's, his own entity.

Can I say a loud AWW at imagining Caleb and Tarquin 5 yrs older?

Why did no one try to stop her from marching up to Lucas on her wedding day, before the actual wedding? It's supposed to be bad luck. Angry Lucas was the only sensible enough to point it out.

OMG TARQUIN POV? *hearts pop in background*

but she seemed to be going pink in my company a lot these days. - You naive little boy, you.

AND MARK GOT HOOKED! Well, by a surprise son but hey. That's just fucking perfect. And hell yeah we picked on who Jasper's mum is, lol!

Pah, endings are sad even if they're sweet. It means no more of that bunch. I seriously enjoyed reading this, though. Thanks to all that crazy media our generation's subjected to, you were able to inject a hella good dose on reality on this, even though you probably don't chat with a celeb on daily basis. (Do you?) The punctuation issue seemed to have gotten better steadily as we drove forth, but it could still use tightening. Also, sometimes phrasing was weird or convoluted, so that's something to note, too.

Thank you for sharing the story! And hasta la proxima. :D

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And right now it sucks to be Isobel.

"I just about to have to make love to the faculty secretary to get your timetable, we get mobbed and then you take the opportunity to bolt? That's not on." - I was just about...?

"Not that she's going to be there, but I guarantee you her fridge will be full of more edible things than mine. - Missing quotation mark.

GARY! I'D MISSED YOU!

Mark's reaction to Isobel's ILY? Priceless. Hear that, Master Card?

"I'll pick Bridget up while I'm there. - Mischievous quoty mark, running away like that.

Now Isobel was gone nobody was going to be wandering around the flat. - Now that...

There was a long stretch of silence as the girls did that telepathic thing women could do where they had an entire conversation just with looks. - Which just goes to prove how superior our minds are. Kidding aside (or not), this is so true. I don't really know what it is about women, but we have this uncanny ability down pat.

"Fuckin' hell! She's not pregnant, is she?" I exploded. - WAHAHAHA!

The good thing is that the solution is up ahead, and you'll finally be rid of my odd, choppy reviews, but sadly, that's that. Dawmn. The gooder thing (gooder is such an amazing made up word), is that I don't have to wait for the end so there I go!

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GAH! Tabloids at their best/worst. I'm thinking Robert's last name suits him; or more like castration would be a fitting punishment for him. *hides machete*

I'm starting to think Lucas to be the live action version of Bob the Builder, what with his penchant for fixing everything.

GAH! (Again.) I'm so disappointed in Isobel for planting the idea in Lucas' mind that violence is bad. LOL! I would have much enjoyed watching him pound the ground with Rob's head. I sure damn hope he'll screw the fucker another way. (Pretty please? :D)

Huh, would you look at that. I always thought Britney's Overprotected was her cry out to people, telling them that shit was going downhill. And whaddaya know, it did and no one believed her until she shaved her head like a Shaolin.

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I'm wondering if I find myself in a compromising position with a hockey player or footballer (the FIFA kind), something like this would happen to me. Wouldn't it be nice? It would. *day dreams*

Oh, and I'm so glad my second theory about Bridget was right. She'd just told Isobel about wanting to sleep with Lucas to keep her off! (Well, look at how well that worked.) Now, get your shit together with Xavier, woman!

Every guy I sleep with ends up hating me and not just hating me, but really hating me. - That's not exactly right. The guys ignore her and don't want to repeat with her, it's the girl's who really, really hate her. Was that on purpose, misguided impression or an accident?

And yay! At last Xavier has his natural hair colour!

...And Bridget!

"As someone who has a lot of women out there hating him, trust me on this one, they hate it when you don't tell them stuff." - Great advice Mark, truly. He has the best one-liners in the entire thing.

Ah, time for Isobel to deal with the ugly. I liked the buildup to it, the subtle hint that Gary wasn't bugging her much. There's still much that's going to bite Lucas' ass.

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Generic and vanilla. I can't think of a better description myself. *makes barfing sound*

*throws hands up* C'mon Lucas, KISS THE GIRL!

No, that was a new faucet he'd added to his interfering repertoire. - Faucet or facet?

Atta boy, that's the right thing to do. Make our heroine perform like Carla. :D

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"You just deal with," I waved in the general direction of her massive stomach, "that thing and we'll talk later. - Missing quotation mark.

Andy let out a sigh of relief and mimed applause at Isobel, my family's own little peacemaker. - What, what? Lucas, you already consider Isobel family? HOHOHO.

"Don't break my heart, my achy, breaky heart. I just want you to understand..."

Oh dear, lots of (fun) confrontations this chap. I love it when everything piles up like this, except in real life. IRL it's just horse manure.

What's going on here? You don't really care about what I did, it's not like it's held you back at all so what is it that's making you all…?" - Missing quotation mark at the beginning.

"I'm actually going to chalk this one down as a nightmare. and, just in case you were wondering, - Missing caps on And.

Ah hah, so Bridget doesn't want to shag Lucas? The mystery lives on!

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Oho, Isobel turned Carla. Hmm yeah, Lucas isn't the type to go for the kid gloves treatment, actually. He's all rough and demanding. Fun.

Wait a mo, I have a feeling in the previous chapter I'd read Isobel's dress pooled at her feet, unless I was too sleepy. Which means she was either half naked as this happened or... I don't know.

"And thank God!" He said fervently, before kissing me again. - LOL! Atta boy, yay!

Ohh, I love those moments when things are so near reach, and then they're driven away. It's so sad, so... brilliantly evil. And a little bro to bro confession, to boot! I still want to know if Bridget's out to get Lucas to get Xavier off of her (which is major bitchy, considering it'd put a damper on the bros' relationship), but also typical of a commitment phobe.

I shall read on... and try to finish before midnight because, holy shitzorz, going up to 4am last night took its toll on this old lady.

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Hey. Love the story. It's the second time I've read it actually. Just wanted to mention that I totally agree with you.

Am a diehard romantic myself and yet I've always thought that if Sandy and Danny really loved each other it wouldn't have been like that. The Pink Ladies were horrible in a way, I think Rizzo gets nicer but was super harsh at the beginning and , above all, why would Danny talk about her so disrespectfully behind her back? However I adore the songs, so they kinda make up for it :)

Anyway...

As I helped Caleb out of the Phil's car I noticed that my car - Extra the.

How could my beautiful, smart, talented sister have been so fucking stupid? - I agree. And the blowup that was come finally came. Ouchie.

Oh damn, Bridget had started off as an amusing character. I'd hoped she'd be all good and softie behind the thick layers of makeup. But either she's not turning out to be one, and could possibly be the biggst bitch in the story, or something with Xavier is messing up her game. I hope it's the latter. D:

And I hope Isobel put the iron down safely and didn't burn a hole through her clothes and the table. :D

Screw sleep! I'll read till I drop! (Which could be soon; I'm already having too many typos to fix.)

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