I love it. The story was so cute. A new way to the cliche!

this storie is super duper good! :)

hey dont mean to be rude but thought you'd like to know.
its a bit difficult to read your story cause of the grammar. if you could work on that it'd be awesome. (=

Hey, I just read the story (in one sitting, I might add) and I don't usually comment on stories, but I just had to say how much I loved it! You really have a talent for setting a certain mood for a scene, and your characters are really diverse and real. I've read a lot of stories on the 'net and I've seen that characters are usually the hardest thing to get right, but you really made youre characters distinguishable. The only real critique I can come up with is that there are quite a lot of grammar mistakes, like miss-spelled words or just wrong-placed words. That's all, I guess ^^.

Much respect to your storytelling!

I don't know if you still read these reviews, but I thought I'd try anyways. :) I really like your story. Dimitri sounds way hot, even if he was/is kind of a jerk. :P I felt a bad for Roger at the end though, but it was tuned out by my happiness for Jade and Dimitri. One question though, who was the girl at the airport? Was he actually cheating on Jade? lol

this is such a good story! =] i love it!

ohemgee

so DIS is s final chappi..

I LOVE IT :D

its brilliant =]

whew. she didnt end up marrying roger

i wud have murdered u at skool =P

xx.

hahaha
i have to disagree
plane food is ok. qantas does good brekkies. =]
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i love love love the easter show!
whe!
i'm like showbag obsessd, i go through all the showbags each year to find the best ones =]=]=]=]=]
hahaha cant wait for next year! and christmas!
CHRISTMAS
and indian bazaar. which is awesomely aweosme. but maybe you dont know what it is..
lol
anyways!
i shall keep reading
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YAY!
GO MEL!
knew you wouldn't kill me =D
HAPY ENDING!
*celebrates*
i think you deserve a toast
champagne anyone?

Uh... sorry, but this chapter was really confusing...

*cheers* FINALLY!

i knew it! i soo called that! i knew she wouldn't marry roger! and that Dimitri would realize he needed her and they would be together in the end and she would cry and -... i'm rambling... but yay! i'll be sure to look out for your other stories! i'm so glad you added this last chapter, even if it means no sequel... sad... but i'm too happy to be sad! really good job! and you should be happy with all your chapters because none of them really sucked... lol! great job!

Oh my gosh! I thought that last chapter was the last chapter! I'm so happy she ended up with dimitri, but you never explained what happened at the air port. I was just wondering is all. Anyways, nice chapter and amazing story!

~BW2~

"And of course, the Gorgeous broken.heart.x or Kat; to whom I would not have been inspired to write and she has always been there to help me with this story, without her it would be nothing."
aww thanks mel! well i loved the story, and i mean im glad they got together. i just wish it would be like them together longere? u get me? hehe and im proud of you!

love kat xx