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| MorBiD LigHt 2008-08-24 ch 6,  | abuseYou must up date I demand it..lol I'm jk But seriously update please *pouts* |
| bandgirlz 2008-07-18 ch 6, | abuseOk, you're evil. How do you leave a cliffhanger for over a YEAR?? That's just excessively mean, and if you don't finish your story, I'm going to be forced to write it myself (in my head), and characters are going to die! Choose! Yes, I know I'm crazy. But you're mean. |
| Dark Fever 2008-07-01 ch 6, | abusewhat do you mean the cant be together?!! but you are going to have them be together right? and omg what happened to...shit whats his name...um...Edward! thats it. is he dead? is he barely hanging on? does Kirin go into a blood rage? omg so many questions and no answers! you have to update soon, i love this story so far, its just so great, continue soon see yha! |
| .not.a.nice.GIRL. 2008-06-06 ch 6, | abusethe story's great! but could you update soon please? im not a very patient person... |
| just-call-me-stalker 2008-05-22 ch 2, | abuse“Explain this instance!” instant |
| shelimar 2008-03-27 ch 6, anon. | abuseI just wanna know if this is gonna be continued or not. i wanna know what gonna happen between edward and kirin. come on get to the updating. please |
| Jayjack 2008-01-27 ch 6, | abusei'm done reading this. fuck it. i skipped half of the chapter. ughh he's gay fucking a. what the hell. ugh... the agony. |
| Jayjack 2008-01-24 ch 5, | abusedamn it he's gay. this sucks. |
| Jordz 2008-01-21 ch 6, | abusewoah.. nah he wont die coz you too nice claire lol.. seeu next chap. xx |
| Story Critic 2008-01-20 ch 6, | abuseaww no dont let Edward die! Love the story |
| tamingriki 2008-01-19 ch 6, anon. | abuseGod I hate cliffhangers!! Better update soon or I'm going to tear my hair out!! |
| JtheChosen1 2008-01-14 ch 6, | abuseAWESOME STORY! plz update soon, i luved reading this so much! |
| deathandthemaiden 2008-01-07 ch 6, | abuseOh my gosh! UPDATE!! |
| Kitty411 2008-01-07 ch 1, | abuseNice story... please write the next chapter the susspense is killing me! |
| Sheepie 2008-01-04 ch 6, | abuseI have to admit this is a faintly addicting story. I like it and can't wait for an update. I admit, a little more of a description would be nice when it came to certain characters and appearance. You described Kirin. There are a few grammatical errors as well--but who am I to point for that? xD Those creep up everywhere! Also, one thing that really bugged me was the title. It doesn't seem to fit the story. I get that Edward is an outcast... but beyond maybe the first three chapters it doesn't really fit. Other then that I loved this story and I'm anxiously waiting for an update--SO HURRY! :3 |