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| Chowdizzle 2008-07-05 ch 1,  | abuseSo, since you haven't updated this in a long time I'm assuming that you're over this story, however I am dropping a review just in case. I really like this story and like where it is going, I really do hope you continue it. I'm putting it on story alert hoping that you will! :) |
| eg 2008-02-09 ch 4, anon. | abuseupdate! |
| eg 2008-02-09 ch 3, anon. | abuseupdate! |
| eg 2008-02-09 ch 2, anon. | abuseupdate! |
| eg 2008-02-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseupdate! |
| re 2008-02-04 ch 4, anon. | abuseupdate! |
| re 2008-02-04 ch 3, anon. | abuseupdate! |
| re 2008-02-04 ch 2, anon. | abuseupdate! |
| re 2008-02-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseupdate |
| CakeForEveryone 2008-01-27 ch 4, | abuse*sobs* PLEASE! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! |
| CakeForEveryone 2008-01-27 ch 3, | abuseWill bribery change your mind? |
| CakeForEveryone 2008-01-27 ch 2, | abuseSeriously, I love this story! |
| CakeForEveryone 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abusePlease please please continue this story! |
| Tom 2007-05-19 ch 4, anon. | abuseSimply brilliant! I loved the article at the end, there's so much depth to Razi. Excitedly awaiting the next chapter... |
| nonaccount 2007-05-19 ch 4, | abuseIt's cute how Razi calls Alton "royalty" and how his smile slipped when he realized he probably wouldn't see him in person again. Although, I think Alton's gonna sneak out to see Tattoo Tears in concert. I don't know about the UK and I know even less about their monarchs (even though, obviously, this is fictional) - it just seems a little unbelievable that Alton wouldn't know how to swim. Did he have some sort of traumatic experience? I didn't realize Tattoo Tears was famous enough that Aaron might have thought Alton would have recognized her. Is that one of the reasons she likes to pick up strangers? For the notoriety? |