That was a VERY good last chapter, but I'm so sad that it's over! The way you did the end with the newspaper was really cool! :D I really loved this series and I think that you did an AMAZING job with it!! I'm very proud of you, sis!!

OMG! You can't just leave me hanging like that! I HAVE to know what happens with Jeremy! You are so good at writing suspense! LOL!

Anyway, I'm not going to ask you to update soon, cause I already know that you aren't updating for like two more weeks, but I am going to say that I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!

Another Bruce/Lola part that I LOVED! And the part with the cat was HILARIOUS! Poor Jeremy! LOL!

Okay, on a serious note, the guy is dead?!? OMG! I wonder who did it! I REALLY can't wait to read more! This is such an AWESOME story!

AW! Lots of sweet parts! I LOVED this chapter! The part with Bruce and Lola was very sweet, but so heartbreaking! And the last scene with "Luc" and Arika was AMAZING! I ADORED Lucas's last line! AWESOME, AWESOME job! I can't wait to read more!

Okay, you're forgiven for not having Lucas in the last chapter, cause I loved the part with him and Arika in this one! :) I don't really know why I adore Lucas as much as I do, it just happened! LOL! The part with Lola and Jaden was sad, but I really liked it! I can't wait to read more! PLEASE update soon!

That was a really good chapter! My favorite part was the end! It was sad, but your descriptions were AMAZING! I could completely feel Lola's emotions and everything! GREAT job! Can't wait to read the next chapter(which Lucas BETTER be in *glares at you*)!

You're not seriously going to leave it there?!?! *stunned* I HAVE to read more!

This was a great chapter! You're getting much better at making them longer! I LOVED the part where Arika touched Lucas's arm! *sigh* LOL! I know, I'm weird! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! (And I REALLY want a good Lucas part SOON!) PLEASE!

You're starting to say ya'll as much as I do! LOL! I liked this chapter! :D Lucas is the best guy in the whole world! *sigh* LOL! I can't wait to read the next part with him and Arika! Poor Lola, that part with her was so sad! :( PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

I guess that was enough Lucas, but I'd still like more! :D You should be glad that someone adores one of you characters as much as I do! LOL! VERY good chapter! It's getting so complicated and there are just so many questions that need answered! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

I think this is one of my FAVORITE Bruce chapters in a long time! I ABSOLUTELY loved him in the part with Lola! Speaking of Lola, I feel just AWFUL for her, for everyone! And I hope Zoe is going to be okay! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Yes, you are mean to your characters...and to your READERS! UGH! I HAVE to know what happened! Where's Zoe?!? Did somebody take her?!?! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE update soon!

What?!? What happened to Zoe?!? Is she okay?!? Where'd she go?!? PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I HAVE to know what happened!

P.S. LUCAS WASN'T IN THIS CHAPTER EITHER! You better go into hiding, because it isn't going to be very safe for you in this house! *glares at you*

That was a very lighthearted and enjoyable chapter and I LOVED the additions to the family, but there was still a problem with it...WHERE WAS MY LUCAS?!? I NEED him! LOL! :D Please UPDATE soon and put my Lucas in the next chapter so that I don't GO NUTS! PLEASE!

I'm very upset that it took you so long to update! I missed my precious Lucas VERY, VERY much! Please don't make me go through that again! LOL!

This was a great chapter! I LOVE, LOVE, LOVED it very much! The Jeremy/Arika scene was sweet and so was the Lucas/Arika scene! I really liked both, along with the waiting room scene! LOL! I'll just say that I liked the whole chapter! LOL! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!

AWESOME! I really liked this chapter too! :D You did a great job with it! I can't wait to read more(I know that I always say that, but I don't know what else to say, LOL!) PLEASE UPDATE SOON!