cute oneshot _

I liked this story; light hearted, funny, sweet! I do ponder on how Danny was able to drive after drinking two bottles of vodka though? But still very enjoyable!

-Ascarda

This story is sweetly innocent and optimistic. I enjoyed reading it.

Like a snake in a grass, you kept this one sneaky Amy ;]

Anywho, it was cute, but because I've just watched house, I imagined Matt as Wilson.

I don't know why.

"I guess I'm out of the closet."

I love how bored he is about it xD

This is just because I'm a crazy Stephen King follower, but trying using less adverbs. Instead of writing "he said happily", try making all the words around what he said make the reader know he's saying it happily. ...get it?

Anyway, UPDATE. :D

Aww, i like this :) It was sweet

Heh - that was a long way to go just for that... in a one-shot, too. :)

'S okay, though. I unnerstand how it can be when the muses hit like that. Not much you can do about it.

Now, if this were Chap 1 of a story where something was going to happen to TEST the boy's new 'ship, that'd be different. Think about it.

Danny really decided to come out, just like that? That's pretty brave of him. I'm not sure if you're going to continue this, but I'd be interested in reading more. :)

aw, that was cute! Is it just a one shot? keep it up!

For a first story, that's rather good... I enjoyed it, and hope to see more coming from you soon. Also, it is always better to write/read stuff using first person... As in, you write "I" and the thoughts going through "my mind" :P

cute! matt sounds like a sweetie, totally someone i'd fall for.

great job!

So good! I want to know more! How does Danny handle it and stuff?

OH MY GODS D:! It's really amazing _ But I would.

ARRGH.

IT'S SO CUTE! And... And... BELIEVABLE! I want more, more I say! More than a one-shot!

Arrgh! Matt's so CUTE!

This is too awesome for words D: You're like, as good as Stupid Post-It Notes!

Seriously!

WRITE MORE D

Please?