| Reviews for Confessions |
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PinkHart 2/4/13 . chapter 1cute oneshot _ |
Ascarda Astachi 6/9/12 . chapter 1I liked this story; light hearted, funny, sweet! I do ponder on how Danny was able to drive after drinking two bottles of vodka though? But still very enjoyable! -Ascarda |
frogs of war 6/8/09 . chapter 1This story is sweetly innocent and optimistic. I enjoyed reading it. |
Martha 6/26/08 . chapter 1 Like a snake in a grass, you kept this one sneaky Amy ;] Anywho, it was cute, but because I've just watched house, I imagined Matt as Wilson. I don't know why. |
Insomiak 1/19/08 . chapter 1"I guess I'm out of the closet." I love how bored he is about it xD This is just because I'm a crazy Stephen King follower, but trying using less adverbs. Instead of writing "he said happily", try making all the words around what he said make the reader know he's saying it happily. ...get it? Anyway, UPDATE. :D |
firestar267 12/9/07 . chapter 1Aww, i like this :) It was sweet |
failte200 9/14/07 . chapter 1Heh - that was a long way to go just for that... in a one-shot, too. :) 'S okay, though. I unnerstand how it can be when the muses hit like that. Not much you can do about it. Now, if this were Chap 1 of a story where something was going to happen to TEST the boy's new 'ship, that'd be different. Think about it. |
nonaccount 9/11/07 . chapter 1Danny really decided to come out, just like that? That's pretty brave of him. I'm not sure if you're going to continue this, but I'd be interested in reading more. :) |
magalina 6/22/07 . chapter 1aw, that was cute! Is it just a one shot? keep it up! |
Satan'z Myth 6/15/07 . chapter 1For a first story, that's rather good... I enjoyed it, and hope to see more coming from you soon. Also, it is always better to write/read stuff using first person... As in, you write "I" and the thoughts going through "my mind" :P |
sweets555 4/18/07 . chapter 1cute! matt sounds like a sweetie, totally someone i'd fall for. great job! |
acriter 4/16/07 . chapter 1So good! I want to know more! How does Danny handle it and stuff? |
Homophobes.WhoNeedsThem 4/16/07 . chapter 1OH MY GODS D:! It's really amazing _ But I would. ARRGH. IT'S SO CUTE! And... And... BELIEVABLE! I want more, more I say! More than a one-shot! Arrgh! Matt's so CUTE! This is too awesome for words D: You're like, as good as Stupid Post-It Notes! Seriously! WRITE MORE D Please? |