i love this. it's very beautiful and...intricate, i guess. i can't think of a better word. i envy your abilities as a writer.

Beautiful, beautiful! The imagry in this is really great-your poem reached out to me. I am filled with admiration.

Beautiful is the only word I can find to accurately describe this poem. Great rhythm, and the repetition immediately demands attention from "Maestro," one individual, and from the world as a whole. I love the line, "I comb my hair with the thickness of your words"-it makes language seem so tangible, as real as anything we can sense or feel in the physical world.

-Allis D.

i like the repition a lot... the last line is very nice

...still speechless from that last poem, and this one only intensified that. Marvelous. I love your descriptions and the repitition of 'Maestro.'

An exquisite poem, with beautiful and quite sensual imagery. I much enjoyed reading it. Very wonderful and I commend you. Truly good work.

Thank you indeed for the review. It has been a while since I have read your work and for that I am sorry. I will try to read and review more.

With regards,

Anaare

Beautiful Imagery throughout the piece:

I will not squander love, like the

child-faced woman who brought you

to me. Whimsical, and wrapped

in mornings haunting glow. I comb

my hair with the thickness of your

words, Maestro. I cover my breasts

with the weight of sound.

Sensual, and stunningly composed; yet there is such a thread of sadness throughout. You’ve shown here experience of a tragic life, yet also such innocence in this stanza, and if this had been the entirety of the piece it would still hold the same worth.

Very Well Done

KEEP WRITING!

F.C

I think the true meaning behind this is beyond my reach but I still think it's beautifully written and well spoken. There's such poetic beauty resonating through this poem that it makes my heart ache. much admiration, _Kari

been awhile, no? love this piece, its quite deep. lovely imagery. simply love this piece, a favorite. peace

This is beautiful. P.S. I love the title. Seriously.

pretty love the imagery. nice work.

You always write beautifully!

I am going to add it to my favs and my C2!

Best Wishes!

*TSP

beautiful in that felliniesque kind of way. inspiring.

WOAH! Okay-this one blew me away-awesome! You have a definate talent for writing-I love the images in this piece - quite lovely!

absoultley beautiful.

Peace and Love

Lifted